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Post by FlareonMaster Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:19 pm

Ok, this is one of LeagueProductions hardest film series so far aside from the Lightsaber Duel series we make and I would appreciate finding out what everyone thinks of it only because it is something we have worked on for a while now (first episode filmed last November) The finale episode comes out this summer but if you guys would like to comment and tell us what you think of it so far here then please do or to give ideas or suggestions for the finale.

Episode 1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pL53B0C_QI
Episode 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GgtouVNslGk
Episode 3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Bfd3ODtWAc
Episode 4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3S38APJEyg
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Post by Salmarnir Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:00 pm

All due respect, I find the acting sorta cheesy. The one guy who I guess is the main character tries way to hard to be serious, and the fight scenes need work. I'm not an expert but thats my opinion. I like your guys' creativity though, keep up the good work.
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Post by FlareonMaster Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:18 pm

Ok, I want to know peoples opinions so thanks!

Also, if you saw episode 3 or you will see the fights were worked on a lot more. IDK which episodes you saw though. (Episode 1 and 2 were more like trial episodes to see if we liked the plot while episode 3 and 4 were worked on more)


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Post by Malvoleunomy Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:19 pm

Lol, why does this Series get a special topic? lolz.

I might make one when I start on the Arena Series. . .
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Post by FlareonMaster Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:21 pm

We can ask about the lightsaber videos if you want Mal. Razz
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Post by Archaon 5100 Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:28 pm

practice fight scene over and over and make sure person watching is honest about if it looks realistic Razz

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practice lines and character developement
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Post by FlareonMaster Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:31 pm

We did actually get the lines out as they were written. As for character development, the main character Nathan stays the same way until episode 5 and same with the rest of the cast. Razz As for the fights I agree, we worked a ton harder on episode 3 and 4 though but they need work. In the finale episode we are going to try and do everything perfectly and we are re-filming some extra scenes to add to the series and put the series together as one at some point after it is over to make it make more sense and make it more plausible.
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Post by Eagle Eye307 Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:44 pm

Episode 4 is the best in my opinion, although 3 was pretty good too.

I think the fight scenes are the main thing that need to be worked on. The style just doesn't seem quite right (it looks more like lightsaber fighting with sticks than a martial arts type of thing). I think we have spent too much time making Star Wars videos. Razz

The cinematography is great though. Very Happy
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Post by FlareonMaster Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:00 am

I think the style will be improved in episode 5. Also to point out, the main character is simply angry his friend is dead and sort of lost it and all other sense other than revenge so that is why he is over serious. Razz
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Post by Applepie533 Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:37 am

Lmao, I love mal's animation in his sig!
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Post by Popyseed11 Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:39 am

I'd say work on the fight scenes a bit more to make them more... better?
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Post by FlareonMaster Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:22 am

I understand for the first two episodes and we are going to work harder for episode 5 but I don't see exactly how episode 3 and 4 are awful too? They aren't perfect and do need work I admit though. (it is also due to editing, not so much camera angles)
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Post by Malvoleunomy Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:10 am

Yah, I think that a major problem is that we have been using Lightsabers for too long and it is hard to make a decent fighting scene without sabers and guns (Or atleast for me that is)
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Post by FlareonMaster Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:37 am

Well the style wasn't fully like sabers. I mean, it wasn't like the actors weren't touching the middle or something like a saber as the saber would cut your hand off. Razz
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Post by Eagle Eye307 Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:30 am

The swings and blocks look somewhat like saber fighting though. In fact, I even noticed a couple of "saber locks".
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Post by FlareonMaster Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:57 am

Ya, I never said you are wrong, just that the style is different a little and swords have locks too. Razz
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Post by Malvoleunomy Sat May 01, 2010 9:14 am

yes, but I have three friends who take fencing (and funny enough two of them take karate too) but I have tried to sword fight against them and they don't stop to take breaths, they just continue to cut, jab, perry (sp?) and everything. But in real double-handed sword fighting, there are not a lot of locks, mostly because the swords are generally so heavy that you do not want to hold them upo for long periods of time.
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Post by FlareonMaster Sat May 01, 2010 9:16 am

They had them in Lord of the Rings. Razz Doesn't matter. Also, those are curtain hangers with sharp edges and a stick that was broken in two, not swords. LOL
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